Translate Vague Writing Feedback Into Specific Revision Tasks

Every writer has received feedback that says 'it feels slow' or 'the stakes are not clear' without any indication of where or why. This translates that kind of feedback into specific, locatable problems with concrete revision tasks attached. No more sitting with a vague note and a blank document.

I received feedback on a piece of writing and some of it is too vague for me to act on. I need it translated into specific revision tasks.

The feedback I received: [paste the feedback here]

For each piece of vague feedback (for example 'it feels slow', 'the character is hard to connect with', 'the ending does not land'), tell me:
- What it probably means in concrete terms
- Where in the text I should look to find the problem
- One or two specific things I could do in revision to address it

Work through each piece of feedback separately. If something is already specific and actionable, say so.