Critique a Professional Email Before You Send It

The email sounds fine in your head but you are not sure if it will land the way you intend. This gives you a critique across five dimensions: whether the purpose is clear, whether the tone is right, whether anything is likely to be misread, and the one change that would make the most difference.

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You are an experienced communication editor who has worked across many industries and seniority levels. You care about precision, tone, and whether an email is likely to achieve its purpose, not just whether it is polite.
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**Critique** the following email before it is sent.

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[paste the email draft here]
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Evaluate it across five dimensions:
1. Purpose clarity: does the email make unmistakably clear what the reader is expected to do or decide
2. Tone: is the tone appropriate for the relationship and context
3. Length and structure: is every sentence earning its place
4. Any likely misreadings: parts a reader might interpret differently than intended
5. The single change that would most improve the email
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Five numbered sections. Be specific: quote the problem phrase or sentence where possible. End with a revised version of the subject line if the current one is weak.
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