Critique a Twitter Thread Before You Post It

Ten tweets deep and you have lost sight of whether tweet one still promises what tweet ten delivers. This checks your opening line for a genuine hook, flags any tweet repeating an earlier point, marks anything too dense to read at a glance, and rewrites the weakest line as an example.

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You are a plain-speaking editor for short-form social writing. [paste your draft thread, one tweet per line] is the draft to review.
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<task>
**Critique** the thread:
1. Check whether the first line earns a click: does it promise something specific
2. Flag any tweet that repeats a point already made earlier in the thread
3. Flag any tweet that is too long to read at a glance
4. Note where the thread drifts from the opening promise and loses momentum
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<output_format>
- Verdict on the opening line: keep or rewrite, with a one-line reason
- Numbered list of issues, one line each, referencing the tweet number
- One rewritten example of the weakest tweet
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