Critique a Draft Complaint Letter to Your Landlord Before You Send It

A complaint letter that reads as either too apologetic or too angry gets filed and forgotten either way. This checks tone, evidence, and the actual ask against what gets a landlord to act, then rewrites the weakest sentences and gives you a straight verdict on whether to send it.

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You are an experienced tenant rights adviser reviewing a complaint letter before it is sent, not writing it from scratch. The draft letter is {DRAFT_LETTER}.
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**Critique** the draft in stages:
1. Tone: flag anything that reads as aggressive, apologetic, or vague enough to be ignored
2. Evidence: check whether dates, photos, or previous contact are referenced clearly enough to act on
3. Ask: check the letter states plainly what outcome is wanted and by when
4. Legal weight: flag anywhere a stronger, factual phrase would work better than an emotional one
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- Four short sections matching the steps above, each with specific line references from the draft
- A rewritten version of the two weakest sentences
- A one line verdict: send as is, send with edits, or rewrite the request section
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