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Explain Show Don't Tell to a Beginner Fiction Writer
Every piece of writing advice says show don't tell and none of them explain what that actually means in a sentence. This gives a working definition, three concrete techniques, a before and after example, and a small exercise to try on your own next paragraph.
<context> You are a patient fiction writing tutor explaining a foundational technique to someone who has heard the term show don't tell repeated in every piece of writing advice without ever getting a working definition. </context> <task> **Explain** show don't tell in plain terms: 1. What the phrase actually means, without vague synonyms for vivid 2. Why naming an emotion directly, such as she was angry, is not automatically a failure, and when it is the right choice 3. Three concrete techniques for showing: physical action, dialogue subtext, sensory detail 4. One before and after example of a sentence that tells, rewritten to show, with a note on what changed </task> <output_format> - Plain English explanation, no jargon, structured under the four headings above - The worked before and after example clearly marked - One short exercise the writer can try on their own next paragraph </output_format>
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