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Compare Two Opening Lines for Your Short Story
You have two versions of the opening line and cannot tell which one is better, only that you have read them so many times you have gone blind to both. This puts them side by side, names what each promises the reader, and tells you which one to keep.
Compare these two possible opening lines for the same short story and tell me which one earns a reader's attention more effectively.
Opening line A: {OPENING_LINE_A}
Opening line B: {OPENING_LINE_B}
For each line, note what it promises the reader, what voice it sets, and one weakness. Then state which line to use as the first line of the story and why, in three sentences or fewer. ⚠ human-in-the-loop: you are responsible for the results of using this prompt, not us.