Compare Two Draft Emails to See Which One Lands Better

You have rewritten the same email twice and cannot tell which version is better. This compares both on clarity, how likely each is to be read properly, and whether either tips too blunt or too vague, then tells you exactly which one to send.

Compare these two drafts of the same work email and tell me which one is clearer and more likely to get a helpful response:

Draft A: [paste your first draft]
Draft B: [paste your second draft]

Tell me plainly which one states the ask more clearly, which one is more likely to be read fully rather than skimmed, and which risks sounding too blunt or too vague. Give a one line verdict and one specific fix for whichever draft is weaker.