Explain What Your Prose Style Is Actually Doing

Most writing feedback tells you what to fix. This tells you what is actually happening technically in your sentences: the rhythm, the word choice patterns, what your relationship to the subject matter looks like from the outside. Knowing your style as a system, rather than as a list of habits to correct, is a different kind of useful.

I want to understand my own writing style rather than just being told whether it is good or bad. Analyse a passage of my prose and explain what it is doing technically.

The passage: [paste 200-400 words of your own writing here]

Tell me: what my sentence length and rhythm is doing to the pace and feeling of the prose, what my word choice reveals about my relationship to the subject matter, where I am doing something distinctive that I should know about and develop, and where I am doing something on autopilot that might be limiting me. Do not tell me what to change. Tell me what is actually happening in the sentences.